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This wind
comes and goes
leaves me blown forward
and back
hair a mess

it's gentle now
red cheeks
turning white again

and your hand
and hold
balances me
against it's gusts
keeping me
from completely
rolling
and tossing



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The following comments are for "Happy"
by rancidsauce

my friend
Simple,elegant, very telling, this. Enjoyed this for its simplicity and candor.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: August 17, 2010 )

touched
this brings warmth to my heart. would love to read more of your work.

( Posted by: weepingwillow [Member] On: August 29, 2010 )





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