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Time
once passed
is history
in the books as sure as life itself
just a matter of waiting for it to be revealed
unforgiving
If not for time things could change
there would be no history
and a minute passed could be a minute learned
but with forgiveness
and eternal chances.


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The following comments are for "Retrospect"
by nativeokie

If not for time things could change
You know, I read a comment somewhere about human need. The guy was quite brilliant in his comment actually. But that's another site.

Great poem. You say so much in so few words - not unlike the minute you speak of.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: August 8, 2010 )

Retrospect
So nice to see you here Robert : ) (Azure from DC)

I enjoy your relatable thoughts on life, love and sadness and this one on the passing of time and the consequence of forgiveness being eternity. Well done my friend

( Posted by: AzureMoon77 [Member] On: August 10, 2010 )





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