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--1 more long afternoon--

It doesn't hurt
to sit here and scribble
as turkey vultures circle
over rush hours traffic.

Distracts from late
September heat
and the lethargy that's
swallowing ones ambition.

Mostly get lost in changing shadow
that get long and thick
as sun settles on western ridge.

By: David E. Howerton

Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game

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The following comments are for "1 more long afternoon"
by bhagwandave

1 more long afternoon...
I was looking at your Avatar thinking...Man he just sits there and eveything rolls off his tongue right into script....and THEN....

Up comes this "It doesn't hurt to sit here and scribble"...

Somewhere in between chill bumps...came this surprise snicker...So Thanks...Good way to start the New Year....

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: January 1, 2011 )

Just had to have a look when you remarked on the Sell by Date thingy I posted...

This could have been my inspiration to write it esp the

and the lethargy that's
swallowing ones ambition

Retirement is great if its not raining..... fortunately here in Vancouver it's cool but dry today.

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: February 23, 2011 )

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