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--A minute away from--

Holding fingers wait for sun
to poke over ridge
small memory for sometime when.
Nagging doubts that come with dawn
and the gentle touch of hands
that removes such.
Leaving us comfortable
and ready for....





By: David E. Howerton


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Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game
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