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--A small way in before--

Almost as bad
as sitting
brain turned off
hoping for the best.

Find such leaves mostly suffering,
and the laughter of others
squabbling over what's left.

Such as they
tear broken things
into less
having as their concern
only themselves.





By: David E. Howerton


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Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game
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The following comments are for "A small way in before"
by bhagwandave

Small way in.....
"Such as they tear broken things into less having as their concern only themselves."


A man whose eyes belong to the world yet he cannot convey because the world is deaf to his gift......

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: January 1, 2011 )





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