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Thought I’d take time


To make up this rhyme,
While the sun’s on my head


And the roses are red.

I miss your kiss


Like the breeze in the trees
Fans the fire of desire


And burns the doves up above.

Guess I just had to say,


My love’s here to stay,
And it won’t go away,


Like a worn-out cliché.



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