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Your resplendent thoughts
on the cusp of vapor
feeding your ego
has left me starved

these heart strings
don't stretch forever
and won't make it to the coast
and back again

I will surely lose myself

your hand would be fine
to hold onto
tightly
the memories
I fear will only be mine

December and September
my dear
you will always be

Perfect



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The following comments are for "Perfect September"
by rancidsauce

perfect
Very nice!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: July 8, 2010 )

perfect september
i feel this
sadly sweet....

( Posted by: cmsmuse [Member] On: July 9, 2010 )





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