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Cinderella stole the Queens grace
and wore it like a dream.
Could have ruled an empire.
Could have ruled the world.
Ruled instead over gossamer
and the fires of Mordor.
The two places only
where such grace is forged.

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The following comments are for "Silver Lace"
by nativeokie

Long time no read, my friend. Well, actually, if you read your recent comments on DC you'd realize how untrue my statement is...

Great use of fantasy as metaphor.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: July 4, 2010 )

Love you brother.
Confused about DC, unless you are BD.

( Posted by: nativeokie [Member] On: July 4, 2010 )

You would be correct, kind sir. I changed it from 80s to BD 'cos I got into yet another scrap with members of DS. I'd explain but it's irrelevant. All that matters is that reading you again is good.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: July 4, 2010 )

Love it.
The consummate scrapper, and it is irrelevant.
Left a comment for you on DC. And thank you.

( Posted by: nativeokie [Member] On: July 4, 2010 )

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