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Something
A Poem

When your heart tells you
About something you want
Something which isn't
Easy to get
All you need to do
Is try a bit harder
To overcome all the
Obstacles on the way
Believe in your
Inner strength
No matter what the
World may have to say
Life without it's
Trademark
Twists and turns
Ups and downs
Isn't worth living
Believe in yourself
And you'll surely
Make your way.


By :- G.S.Vasukumar

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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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by G.S.VASUKUMAR

there's something to this
Very nice flow and it says something significant.

Just a typo, it's should be its

Very good!

( Posted by: sandra [Member] On: June 21, 2010 )

Something
Sandra,

Thanks a lot for your nice comment!!!

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: June 21, 2010 )





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