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Eraser
55 Fiction

“Are you sure you want it?”

“Yes, erase my memories!”

The doctor pressed a button on the machine and it was done.

“Thanks, doc. I’ll never fall in love again.” Rohan said before leaving.

“I never thought a robot can fall in love too!” The doctor said to himself.

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The following comments are for "Eraser"
by G.S.VASUKUMAR

the robot
Humorous and short!

I think grammatically you might use 'could' instead of 'can.'

It's interesting how much you can say in a few words.

( Posted by: sandra [Member] On: June 21, 2010 )

The Robot
Sandra,

Thanks..yeah, you are right.

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: June 21, 2010 )





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