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Diamond splendor spattered against pitch black

As soft breeze blows, rolling through time as chiffon

Leaves rustle, mimicking dry hair in dessert drift

As crystal ball blush enlightens shadows

Fog creeps in grabbing at the earth

As hyper fireflies flicker free

Moments of tranquility pass

While we rest, in our dreams





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The following comments are for "THE BEAUTY OF NIGHT "
by DBurke

Night
I like it when you soften down - this is a sweet night time caress. Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: June 14, 2010 )





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