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Upon the landscape of a dream, I tread ever so solemnly forward. The star-speckled road beneath my feet and the watery waves of the night sky above, I get lost in the fantasy of my travels. I traverse hills without heights and forests without trees, all without purpose and knowing not where I wish to end, but I go on.

A tune ignites the world and joy fills my heart. This song is very dear to me. If only I knew what to call it by, but no matter. I will sing and dance in ways I never have before and will never be able to reproduce, for everything that occurs here is a once in a dream time moment.

A slow rain begins to fall, smearing the once vibrant images of the scenes before me. Though the touch of a rain drop cleanses my mind and pleases my ear, the visions of the past are being washed away, never to be seen quite the same again.

The wash brings forth a new sight to my eyes. Night has given way to light, and light has given birth to a creation of many colors. A rainbow. The red and orange of the hair was as fire, and it warmed me. A yellow light more radiant than sunlight surrounded. The land within sight spread green as the power of life emanated outwards. The fading blue eyes drew me in as I longed to answer the mysteries contained within. A marriage of indigo and violet formed an ephemeral raiment that transcended even dreams in its beauty.

What could I do but become lost?...and I was.

A kind word that is honest and heartfelt can go a long way...

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