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It was like passion

That took time to build

And with the right elements

It became a flame

The flame needed to feed

Therefore, we embraced one another

Knee high in cool water

Steam rose between thighs

As passion began to seize the moment

The flame grew

From bright red, orange and blue

The hottest part of our love

Was the fire that burned

Inside us passionately

And outside us, as we sweat out our desires

Touching swiftly

As anything longer than a second

Would burn-

Either that or extinguish the passion

That we waited so long to linger in

Our time together was more than love and desire

It was our moment to disappear in the fire!

Everything I do, I do with passion. Come join me and see what I can do with words!

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The following comments are for "FIRE"
by DBurke

Girl..that's Hot
Girl....You go on with yourself! love this one......More please

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: June 7, 2010 )

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