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Iir: how about that? it is easy to talk and talk but never say anything of the matter, so how about we skip this little charade and get to the matter.

Andzer: ?

Arvis: are we in a hurry? huh? no time for Arvis games?

Iir: So you know about it?

Arvis: it?


Arvis: so says the impatient, now i dont feel like talking to you...
how are you doing Andzer? growing old?

Andzer: Uhh? ja! little by little, how about you? thought you said goodbye?

Arvis: yeah, but you know me, i get bored so easily, something else caught my eye for a while so i had a scheduled stop by... going back to sleep later.

Iir: Hey!!! you messed up freak!! i just want what you are supposed to deliver to me!

Arvis: uh, quite uneducated are we? dont you want to know more about things? i know the prize at the end of the tunnel.

Iir: so it seems... what things are you talking about?

Arvis: some politeness would be thoughtful of you.


Iir: it would be appreciated.

Arvis: consider this a cartoon world story,
the universe was populated,
its concentrations moved by its own force,
many and many times its senseless moving derived into contraptions,

sense of time, its base, aging,

scattered as it may be into particles,
only absorved and transformed, mixed up anew,
no real creation, no real death, only confussion,

contraptions derive into contraptions in contraptions in contraptions so endlessly,
time passes by, anew rises but old was no good,
ilussions and lies to its concentrations into its force,
itslef lied, itself taught,
deranged absolution for a game with a prize for only one.

Iir: what? is this a joke? you are giving me a riddle?

Arvis: oh, yeah i almost forgot, have this.

Iir: Yarghhhhh!!!! (excrutiating pain scream)


Iir: where am i?
that bastard!!!
what the hell was that? he just gave me this card and then threw me away into the middle of this god forsaken place,
"thats for being such a loud mouth"
pretty card you IMBECILE!!!

????: Hey! look at this guy he is all bloodied up!

Iir: get out of my way!!! im no show,

???????: dude you are real messed up,

????: here let me help you,

Iir: What!!!

????: see, we are real bored and you seem to have quite an interesting story, well take care of your wounds if you tell us your story.. so have we got a pact?

Iir: cough, cough, argh... whatever.

????: that is that then.

from all that was,
to all, that is,
the end

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