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How does one tell a star of late it does not shine as bright?
To what does one wish upon for the might to make it right?
Always in the eyes, but not in sight.
And when it appears, can't hold it tight.
So how does one tell a star it does not shine as bright?
When all one can do is gaze at it all night.

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