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*a happy tune to start off the summer*
~ Please tell me how bad it is. More specifically, is it proper to say "weened upon"? I'm fighting with the rhythm of this. I've split up lines to try and make it read better. Pause's here and there. It's meant to be growled out slowly by the messenger. It's almost the same meter as Cannibal Corpse's "Evisceration Plague" but not exactly. Never mind. ~

shaking off the dirt
of the ground He came up from
knowing what it's worth
smelling the hurt
feeling the worst

a Thing weened upon the blood of the dead
dripping with oil oozing from Its glands
so many teeth you'll never see His face
blue hulking Beast twelve times the size of an ape

you'll never be the same
He knows e x a c t l y-
which ones are to blame
nothing will remain
the place you stand may be the site of your grave

open to nothing yet so warmly enticed
ruled by your fear and by delusions of Christ
His wings unfurl ending light of the sun
behold His power there is nowhere to run

you will never be the same
the place you stand may be the site of your grave
nothing will remain
He knows e x a c t l y-
which ones are to blame

brace yourselves for the Problem Solver
He isn't taking your shit any longer
you'll get message
and you're gonna learn
humans do not belong on the planet Earth

Son of Leviathan has fully emerged
you're only getting what you so deserve
selfish solutions have inflated the curse

He hates the god you serve
you're making it worse
He's sick of your words

brace yourselves for the Problem Solver
He isn't taking your shit any longer
you'll get message and you're gonna learn
humans do not belong on the planet Earth

no one will ever be the same
He knows exactly who has made it this way
nothing will remain
what's your excuse for such pathetic disgrace?

He's sick of your words
you're making it worse
sick of your words
you're making it worse

brace yourselves for the Problem Solver
brace yourselves for the Problem Solver

hates the god you serve
sick of your words
you're making it worse
making it worse
sick of your words
hates what He's heard
what you have birthed
He's sick of your words
you're making it worse
the god you serve



------
Reverend AntinormalitÓ


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The following comments are for "The Problem Solver"
by TheTesticularPrancer

Solver
Powerful word choices - cool really. I liked the mixed common lines in the refrain. Is the two 3 line stanzas a Bridge? Nice big ending. I don't know Rev. but I think it works just fine.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: June 6, 2010 )





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