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such a
small word need
so many more words and
time to be answered, is it
may be that we just want a quick and easy answer
and not one that will make us think of more why to ask of this new answer yes

form is Fibonacci

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by chapter1

¿por qué?
I think the English shortened the word hoping to give the thinker more time to think. You can say "why" really fast and that way the person you just asked can immediately start trying to figure something out. How about them English, huh? They ain't all bad! Pretty smart if you ask me.

( Posted by: thetesticularprancer [Member] On: June 4, 2010 )

I really appreciate the form and the thought that went into this. I liked it - the 8th line bumped in a bit for me - meter worked but I couldn't get the syntax. Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: June 4, 2010 )

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