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(Written For My Horatio Born May 16, 1989 - February 05, 2008)

I lost my heart
And soul today.
The painís so great -
Won't go away.

My heart feels dead,
And oh so cold.
I feel so
Very, very old.

My best friend
Was my Hashe boy.
You were my love,
My pride, and joy.

Since you've gone
Many nights I've cried.
A part of me
That day has died.

Your two paws
Gently held my heart.
I hoped we'd
Never ever part.

My dear and gentle
Cream Point boy.
You brought me years
Of endless joy.

You're looking down
From up above.
My fuzzy sweetheart,
Precious love.

We'll meet again
Someday I know.
My dear
Little Horatio.



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The following comments are for "ODE TO MY HEART"
by Serbits

ode
I liked the premise but the word choice was a bit common, given you are calling it an ode - a little more elevated tone would have been better for me.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: May 28, 2010 )

HORATIO
YOU WILL SEE YOUR FRIEND AGAIN....

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: July 20, 2010 )





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