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How dare you blame this mess on this man
You gave him nothing but drew lines in the sand
How can he ruin a country, weve been falling for years
I look through the racism and laugh through my tears
Six in one hand, half a dozen in the other
Someone is whispering (scapegoat) stay strong my brother

i guess every generation needs somebody to point their finger at and say
LOOK THATS THE BAD GUY!!!!!


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IN THE END THE LAS WILL BE FIRST.


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The following comments are for "OBAMA"
by PAPALAS

We all need . . .
. . . someone to blame, and right now Obama's it. To be honest, however, I'm not sure how I feel about him anymore. I'm not sure if that's because of the rhetoric and propaganda out there, or if it's because I feel he's failed me and our country.

I'm so lost when it comes to what's going on in the world today.

At any rate, I did vote for him . . . but I so wish he had a better grip on the things going on in the world.

Ochani

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Member] On: May 14, 2010 )

"Obama"
No one has ever done as much as this President. His qualifications are: 4.0 Harvard; Harvard Law Professor;Communtiy Organizer; State Senator; United States Senator; President of the United States; Awarded the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize; Good husband; Good father; Does not back off from challenges and cares about all the people as he continues to pursue what is not politically popular. Yes We Can.......

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: May 14, 2010 )

every generation needs somebody to point their finger at
Well, speaking as someone who's had fingers pointed at him, I can honestly say Obama is not the bad guy. Is he a poster boy for the real bad guys? Most likely.

I didn't vote for him and he hasn't given me a reason to wish I had. And, yea, America is slowly going to pot (depending on one's point of view), but that has been happening for a while. It's the long term goal of elitists to subvert the rights of those they see as inferior. Pretty soon we will not have the right to anything. It's already happening. Take Arizona's new anti-ethnic studies law...

But this is a writing site first and foremost.

Your poem reads angry and more like a blog post. Anger is a good thing when writing because it helps to crystalize a moment in time. Some people would say poetry writing requires a clear head. I say, bah! Write in the moment you're living in.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 16, 2010 )

HMMMMMM
SAY GOODNIGHT TO THE BADGUY,

( Posted by: PAPALAS [Member] On: May 24, 2010 )





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