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We can read all the law books.
Yet, will we find any of GODS laws ?
Only in the Bible, it seems they exist.
Dancing before the reader like candy.
Read on and let the rest of GOD be on you.
Some sing and dance the laws of GOD.
Giving the soul a clean sweep on the hand.
Let us all rejoice in the law of GOD.

1998 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES

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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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The following comments are for "GODS LAWS"
by poewhit

Giving the soul a clean sweep
First and foremost, we obey the laws of nature. We are at the mercy of gravity (and I don't mean that metaphorically but that also applies). Did a supreme being create everything we survey? If so, why couldn't He/She have let me keep a full head of hair?

Secondly, In God We Trust, is always in my billfold. Sometimes it's plentiful. Most times not.

Third, the laws of any spiritual book are subjective. How else can one explain abuses?

Not that any of the above reflects on your writing - which, as ever, is honest and succinctly stated. You have a clear understanding of your beliefs and that comes across in your writing.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 13, 2010 )

Bible
You're right. That's why I read the Bible every morning.

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: July 29, 2011 )

Laws
I especially like the parts in the Bible about the laws of forgiveness and grace.
Here... Here>>>

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: July 29, 2011 )





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