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did i hurt you? i know i sometimes suck
did i upset you? sometimes I'm no heart but a block

things are not going okay with me by now
this is not a justifying for any error
but I'm just trying to explain how
tense and pain sometimes drive me to live in terror
so i feel like having no nerve control
I may screw up and it ruins every part of me
and by that time I have nothing to do at all

When things between us go wrong and it takes longer time-
than they are supposed to take
my feelings become uncomfortable and visions become blind
my soul ceases to breathe and my heart starts to ache

what I have done wrong or what I have said
was never meant by heart or by intention
that's why I have to get worried or be afraid
as it brings me more depress and tension

sometimes it is not enough to repeat 'sorry' till the end of the line
though.... it is said to err is human and to forgive is divine

September 30

The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.

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Peaceful dreams,
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( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 9, 2010 )

Welcome Back Hiba!
So nice to see your lovely avatar on the boards again.

Weclome Back!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: April 13, 2011 )

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