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Nyx Quango
Say what?
You can feel it
In your gut

It's the night
Of stainless tango
Cop a squat
Or shake your butt

In the Congress
Of the Goddess
Rang the clang who sang

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.

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The following comments are for "Countdown"
by metrozol

Say what?
Um, do you know something the rest of us don't?

Yea, the world's going to shit but I believe every voice a poet helps inspire can make it worth saving. Assuming that's what you're writing of. If not, then can you share what you're smoking?

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 8, 2010 )

toke up
Than Q for commenting, Toscano. "We never cease to stand like curious children before the great mystery into which we are born." A quote by Albert Einstein. It's a great mantra and a good space from which to put things into perspective

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: May 11, 2010 )

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