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Tiger, tiger, you're so mighty
In you're forest burning brightly
We could be friend, we could be foe
We could belong to each other
Now just wait here, can't control it
Contemplating all the motives
You're so powerful. you're so strong
Suffocate my swollen heart
Until all of the beating stops

I am not....who I use to be
I am not....who you think I am today
I am not....who you think I am today
I am not.... you're darling baby

Tiger, tiger, burning brightly
In you're forest lit by lightening
Viscous teeth and viscous tongue
Blood of lamb will make you lunge
Out of darkness, into light
Gaining status, losing sight
Betray my trust, it's what you're doing
Sanity is what I'm losing
Are you blessing? Are you curse?
Are you something even worse?
Underneath all this am I really good?

I am not....who I use to be
I am not....who you think I am today
I am not....who you think I am today
I am not.... you're darling baby

Free me, free me, free me

Free me from these
Cages of rust
Raging is just
Glazed with distrust
Free me save you
I'll let you go
If you don't throw
Away you're soul
Accept, escape
Into you're hate
I'll set you free
If you let me
I am evil
But still civil
Don't just tremble
I am half you
Free me, free me, free me, free me
Free me, free me, free me, free me, free me


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I don't you can see, I only use my superpowers for good...


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by lifeasweknowit

Free me, free me, free me
I like this. I would remove a few words to help with flow but I don't know if there's music to it so I may just be speaking out of my asphalt.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 5, 2010 )

Tiger
Well written song as are all of yours. I like the verse - the chorus holds a little mystery and almost is disconnected - who is the verse pointing to? Mom? Dad? A lover? the tag on the end would work for me more if it completed the story and the reason for the anger.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: May 6, 2010 )





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