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Breathe in this rush of life
(In this rush of air)
Fingers crossed, hands held tight
Hang on for one more night

Lets slow down a little
Lets let our hearts catch up
You’re missing in my dreams
Wake me up, wake me up

Back to our fast paced lives
Shuttering in your sparkling eyes
We’ll sit and watch as time flies by
We’re holding on for this ride

(My hearts pounding)
Not sure if my feet are grounded
(These words are surrounding)
Our hearts are sounding

Like a duet
A Beautiful melody
Like an eternity
Of just you and me

Breathe in this rush of life
(In this rush of air)
Fingers crossed, hands held tight
Hang on for one more night
Hold on for your dear life

------
Kenneth D. Woodard


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