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Bring me rain (our hearts sound thunder)
Leave me breathless (as we lay under)
A secret place in this sky for our eyes only
(Cold cloud, warm cloud) donít leave me lonely
I know youíre whispering, that I come near
Itís being drawn apart that my mind fears
When love pulls you up, it keeps you down
Donít give (up), in the distant our hearts pound
Closer and closer, where warmth meets cool
We form love clouds baby

Hearts beating, pounding
Light flashing, clashing
Itís raining, pouring
Leaving debris (pieces of you and me)

Bring me rain (our hearts sound thunder)
Leave me breathless (as we lay under)
A secret place in this sky for our eyes only
(Cold cloud, warm cloud) donít leave me lonely
I know youíre whispering, that I come near
Itís being drawn apart that my mind fears
When love pulls you up, it keeps you down
Donít give (up), in the distant our hearts pound
Closer and closer, where warmth meets cool
We form love clouds baby

Our love like an epidemic, taking the nation by surprise
A thousand counts of lightening, when I look into your eyes
Heart racing at 120 miles an hour, gusty winds, 100% chance of showers
Our love storm of the century
When itís over, itíll be yesterday, itíll be history
A hundred stories left by you and me

Hearts beating, pounding
Light flashing, clashing
Itís raining, pouring
Leaving debris (pieces of you and me)

------
Kenneth D. Woodard


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The following comments are for "Love Storm"
by PoeticallyObsessed

Love
Nice imagery - great word choices.'We form love clouds baby!' Very cool I would like to hear it sung!
ken

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: April 17, 2010 )

Love Storm
If this were a song, it would have to be the number one song in the nation. It could easily be the music for a great movie.....that hasn't yet to be written excellent.....

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: April 30, 2010 )





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