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I awoke in this place
in a vessel made of meat, bones, and blood
twenty inches long
breathing sanitized air.
I will go back to sleep
after my time on the rack
at five feet ten inches long
not able to breathe the coffin dust.


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by BAAL

The Rack
The stuff in between is mostly drama - nice job!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: April 9, 2010 )





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