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Five a.m.
We meet again,
sleep eludes me,
Ideas burn in my head.

With each new word,
my brain stops burning,
maybe once i get them out,
I can finally rest.

My muscles ache
yet i urge them on,
my goal is in sight.

the fires out,
the words are down,
my eyelids become lead.

Oh! sweet pillow,
let me lay my smoldering head
and drift upon the bed-liner
on the sea of dreams.

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if the pen is mighter then the sword then the word processer must be mighter then the missile


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The following comments are for "Early morning flame"
by johntellall

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Hard to tame that cerebral beast! Cool!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: April 9, 2010 )





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