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Goin' on about my business, as usual,

Thoughts of you only occasionally

Intruding into my day...


Like sun poking out from behind

clouds of dull routine.


It only hurts once in awhile...


Down from always

To several times a day...


Or night...


Like a nerve-twisted scar...


Itching and burning its

Existence into my tender flesh.


Still goin' on about my business, as usual,


Except

For

Sometimes

------
Crystal Pollard


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The following comments are for "The Scar"
by crystalclear2me

Scar
Hi Crystal
Nice!
ken

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: April 7, 2010 )

Scar
Very vivid, I like it.


Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: April 8, 2010 )





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