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Yesterday morning it felt incredibly good waking up to the soft touch of the yellow sun on my face. Through the parted curtains in our bedroom window I saw the pale sky ribbed with glittering clouds, the long line of interminable pines on the sidewalk were slightly stirred by the morning breeze, the glorious smell of spring was in the air --- half-awake, still. A bessoted sigh escaped my lips as I gloriously said good bye to the thoughts of a bleached world. There, next to my husband, I wished with all my heart that winter has finally faded this year.

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The following comments are for "Blushing Dawn"
by weepingwillow

a besotted sigh
And, I find, I am enjoying this one more than "Moonstruck" - which seemed like something impossible to top.

This one has great longing. Longing for the moment to never end. Longing for it to come around again.

Another great observation.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: May 6, 2010 )

one more sigh
Toscano: I actually like Moonstruck better than this one. I think we all have our favorites, though. Anyhoo, I am tickled pink that someone's actually reading my work. I didn't think someone would notice. Thank you for that.

( Posted by: weepingwillow [Member] On: May 9, 2010 )

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