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In A Dream

V1
I saw you in a dream, a long, long time ago
A vision in pink, with your blue eyes aglow
You smiled at me, to my surprise
A world of wonder, behind your eyes
You laughed and played, were unafraid
To show the world, your smiling face

Chorus
Pictures of you
Like reflections of me
So real it seemed
I didnít want to wake
From my beautiful dream


V2
I heard you in a dream, a long, long time ago
Your laughter a joy, a gift from above
So rich and pure, and full life
So far removed, from strain and strife
Your innocents, so soft and sweet
My love for you, made me complete


Chorus
Whispers of you
Sound so sweet to me
So real it seemed
That I didnít want to wake
From my beautiful dream

V3
I felt you in a dream, a long, long time ago
An angel in my arms, with a tarnished halo
You grabbed my hand, asked me to stay
And all the world just fell away
All my fears became too much
But faded at your touch

Chorus
Feelings of you
Touched something in me
So real it seemed
That I didnít want to wake
From my beautiful dream


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'But I don't want to go among mad people,' said Alice. 'Oh, you can't help that,' said the cat. 'We're all mad here.'
Lewis Carroll



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The following comments are for "In a Dream (Songwriters Challenge)"
by HeRoCoMpLeX

hero's song
Very nice!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: March 30, 2010 )

the music
The music just comes out and sings itself in this one.

Really good one. Well-done.

Best

Wael

( Posted by: waelnawara [Member] On: April 20, 2010 )





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