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My mind is rotting day by day,
Raped and fading into decay,
I cant get out, Im locked inside,
Stuck on this horrific ride.

Can you help me?

Robert Mestre

The Buddhism Primer : An Introduction to Buddhism ISBN 978-1411663343

Artistic Minds Society

Theravada Buddhism Online

"Exterminate all rational thought. That is the conclusion I have come to." William S Burroughs, Naked Lunch

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The following comments are for "My Mind"
by rmestre

my mind
Nope! We are all just lonely single creatures locked in our heads doing our best to make some connection before all the wires burn out. Nicely done the last line is particularly disturbing.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: March 17, 2010 )

While the name is familiar - the style of writing appears to have changed. Can't say it's for the better ... or perhaps my memories are clouded by the glory days of what was and is no more. Maybe that's exactly what your poem conveys? Touched a nerve with me and that's always a good thing.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: March 20, 2010 )

The Not-So-Merry-Go-Round
There's always a seat of torment
on the carousel from hell

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 3, 2014 )

transcend on..
Self-realization is just that.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 5, 2014 )

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