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So, there is a hip hop movement for gays now, yeah, its called homohop. Anyway, i got an invitation to apply for a homohop version of american idol, so im workin on an entry piece.... Just threw this together, let me know what ya think!!!

yea i done the porn ya
you could call me porn star
based on how u see it
i could be ur little whore pa
worn down by a system
economically unborn
is it that some see me
as no more then that whore yall?
goin far
whether yall let me on it or not
be hotter than hot
the realest fierce lil fag in the yard
i keep it goin dont stop
i keep redcordin cipher rocks
rhymes for dive bars
and people who remember drag riots
change the game
cause right now its too quiet
marketing schemes
are antithesis to USO shows drag style
seen back in the first woirld war
but forgot about by my
what the fuck are we headed for
i'll be the show stoppa
the gay version of big poppa
rather fight it out like pac
but still the pop shit sells like rock
and im gonna rock it
till it drops on every shelf
the first homo hop to sell
sending all these media shills to hell
ringin on the fuckin bell
it tolls for thee
stand up and teach our family
about history
and change with me
the game will be forevermore
altered second coming
of hip hop messiah
a homo on fire just inspired
all the queers to rise up
cause every fuckin thing is fake
but you and I can remake
the media into a weapon for today
and rewrite history

"If the America people ever allow private banks to control the issuance of their currencies, first by inflation and then by deflation, the banks and corporations that will grow up around them will deprive the people of all their prosperity until their children will wake up homeless on the continent their fathers conquered." ~Thomas Jefforson

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The following comments are for "Change the Game"
by roach

Do a little editing! Like all spoken word pieces it would depend on how you read this - I can't speak to the genre - whether it is too street, too lurid, or too hard. As I read it and compared it to spoken word I know it has the appropriate rhyme-in-line and cadence - pretty cool!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: March 10, 2010 )

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