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And it's as real as it is allowed.
I look.
I see.
Love

It flickers abashed in your eyes,
they're scared.
Ma'am, there is no need to be scared here.
Because this world is yours too.
You get to create it as I do.
Ancient intuition begun anew.
I've looked back, feeling I've left Love back then...
And I realize, like the student I am,
It's everlasting stupid!
The vehicle changes but "it" does not.


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The following comments are for "Mighty Morphin' Power Love"
by Robert Walker

power
A heady little mind ride this one. Cool!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: March 5, 2010 )

Ancient intuition begun anew
Are you suggesting love cannot evolve? I want to agree but, being a hopeless romantic, I find it hard to do so.

But I can tell you it is different for everyone. Not unlike snowflakes, love is.

Have you not seen The Fifth Element? Cool movie that would have been better without that screetching Chris Tucker.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: March 7, 2010 )





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