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Brilliantly brutal words,
smashing the face
with great and ugly force
and laughing, crazed with pain

Perfectly placed heavens
Situated heavily over the head
with so much weight above
a shout of force lifting the clouds

Beautifully tragic tears
falling like rain
a gentle cleansing
For the intense pain,
clinging to the insides

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Does the wadded up paper ball or the bowling ball fall faster?


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