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god hes so cute
but hes already married
got a boy at home
that i wish wasnt there
he'd be a great fuckin man
like all the ones thats taken
wish he was free now
feelin so forsaken
got the low down blues
and my balls are lifted
in my gut right now
his body is so gifted
i wanna be his bitch
let him slap me in bed
but for now i sit here
jerkin off instead
in my head the world
seems so unfair
i got a heart to give out
but no one else is here
theres nobdy to give it to
or get it from
i wanna fell ya inside me
i wanna make him cum
why oh why am i
so ugly and alone
i sit by the phone
wait for you to call
me when you get home
but you dont
instead your head is filled
with thoughts of your man
god, is there a plan,
why does lovin abandon me once again
c'mon 3 years of hell
and still im the guy who pays
i made a good man cry
he made me crazy in ways
that most boys wouldnt try
i fell like love has been cursed
im well versed in dissappointment
i just wanna be urs
and it hurts to realize
once again its a waste
of my desire and drive
and ability to chase
i want that shit to be done with
i wanna feel your chest
on my back, you inside me
like i have been blessed
so alone in my bed
cum shootin to my nips
i think im sick in the head
wishin it shot in your lips
i know your married but why
does god keep showing me joy
with a boy to take it back
like my heart is a fukkin toy
i said it, mouse in a maze
chasin the cheeze
i wouldn't care
id wash it off
and drop right down to my knees
oh please god
stop inspiring fire inside my groin
cause its a sick sad thing
for me to feel
for a boy
who i cant have

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The following comments are for "Lyric was a stud who lived many lives"
by roach

so ugly and alone
Reads like a rap lyric verse, with its affectations and rapidfireness. (um, is that a word?) It just needs a rhyme scheme and a music video with scantilly clad women.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: March 7, 2010 )

thanks man!

( Posted by: roach [Member] On: March 8, 2010 )

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