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They say the eyes are the window to one's soul-

But the soul is bared in tounge

Expression so easily spoken

But not one ear to listen

They say you can see a persons heart from their eyes-

But many find ways to conceal

Generically wearing a placed smile

But the smile only can cover so much

How deep are the eyes when tears are like repetitive rivers-

But no one will visit them

uncomfortabley they back down

From finding the source of flow

In the dark the eyes are true

displaying visions of real life

In the dead space of time

Where one will forever live

The eyes are only portals between human and soul-

Mines can not sound off

Nor no longer pretend

That the soul is well

Sadness can not be conveyed

Happiness can not be conveyed

Just blank darkness connected to my ears-

I rather be lost in blindness and suffer in my thoughts

Everything I do, I do with passion. Come join me and see what I can do with words!

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The following comments are for "MORE THAN SAD"
by DBurke

your voice is certainly
unmistakable. i may not comment a lot but when i do it's because of something inspirational. something that moves me. something like this fine poem.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: March 6, 2010 )

Sad sad sad! To bad it is so often just as you wrote. Maybe a sign of the times where the temporary and superficial has become so important!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: March 10, 2010 )

What is it and where can I get some
There is a noticeable difference for me in your work, beginning with "A sensual rendition" forward. Its not the format.

What is it? What have you found? So much more eloquent, thought out, cohesive, depth-perception, outstanding, good economy. Its as if blocking, heavy chains have been removed from your pen. Now you speed freely across the plains of definitive writing. Your heart is brave and evident. All of this; I did not see/read this before. Noticeable improvements.

thank you!

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: March 14, 2010 )

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