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The keys of the piano

Stroked so softly

Like butterflies

And sweet melodic rainbows

Joined by Soothing violins

Viola prowling

Intensifying the melody

Ready to devour

Base dominates

Giving depth

Meaning

Climax

Drums solo

With rhythmic strokes

Knocking

Banging

Acoustic finally

A voice of pleasure

Heavenly harps

Small drops of dew

Calming linger



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The following comments are for "MELODIC SEX"
by DBurke

Melodic
Sweet and simple images. I liked this very much.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: March 4, 2010 )

Intensifying the melody
Quite a symphony you have going on here. Liked your use of metaphor. Clever without being overtly obvious.

Where's the encore?

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: March 4, 2010 )

Melodic sex
I thoroughly enjoyed the soft echoes of sex act and the ecstasy you gradually build up in the poem.

R K Singh

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: March 8, 2010 )





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