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I am deeply disturbed. No-no, you don't have to disagree. I truly am. I thought it would be funny if I made my brother think his one hamster ate the other one.

They had seperate cages. He was in the shower. I got a tissue and colored it with a marker to look like the one hamster. I also thought it would be realistic if I stuffed the tissue with tomato.

I put the tissue hamster in the other hamster's cage, and placed the "real" hamster in my room. My brother got out of the shower and went into his room. I was sitting on the bed pretending I had no idea what was going on.

I glanced over at the cage and noticed the hamster was eating the tomato out of the tissue. I didn't expect this to happen! I jumped up and said." Oh my god! I thought they would play together! Daniel, I'm so sorry!" He looked at the cage and the sadistic look on the hamster's face was priceless. It had the tomato hanging out of it's mouth and looked at my brother.

Without words, my brother punched me in the head and ran out of the room. I followed him into the kitchen where I heard him on the phone with my mom. He was crying and he said to her," My hamster! It's all in pieces!"
My brother was thirteen at the time so don't feel too bad for him.

I brought up him hamster and told him what I did. He didn't think it was as funny as I did. Needless to say, he hit me again and didn't speak to me for a while.


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