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Your thoughts in my mind

Your ways in my days

The unpleasant world

Confused like weed haze

Threaded citizens

Like beads on a string

Of living on the verge

Loving negativity

Living ignorantly

Existing like a zombie

Cracked out on life

Her thoughts

Becomes his thoughts

Becoming their thoughts

Feeding my children

To stand against me

A dying breed

Catching the disease

And spreading it like rumors

Afraid to exist

The rumor is

You will die

Forgotten

I will remain

Because I am immune

To the INFECTION

How about you?

Are you INFECTED?




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