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They stay up so late. Four o'clock in the morning, blaring their music in the room next to mine. Singing, no more like screaming at the top of thier lungs. The same songs every single night, and they still don't know all the words!

They drink like fish. Cheap wine and beer until they fight. They drink for twelve hours straight. I never see them need a glass of water in all this time. I wonder what their livers look like?

I have to go to work. Wake up at six when I just went to sleep at four.
All thanks to the party animals right next door. I am tired and dread what kind of a night I will have again. Like a broken record. I wish this was a tale about college. It's not, it's about my parents. I think they need to go to rehab.

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krazi-Renee


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The following comments are for "Up All Night"
by krazirenee

Nice
Hi it is quite easy to read, it is nice and short, so i can understand,
by the way i give you a vote (7)
from cute 14 years old boy...e.e

( Posted by: Lava Inferno [Member] On: May 30, 2003 )





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