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There is no sweeter spot than this-
This gentle brook under the willow tree;-
The roads that lead away, lead here,
A nexus for untrodden, busy steps,
Born here to rest here, eternal bliss,
To fly away to only here be,
I rise, I dream, I turn the aged gear,
I wander into undiscovered depths
To find myself, my only self,
To and from the past;
It's not the world I wish I find,
The only prize,-into the darkness delve-
On frigid waters without a mast,
To be again an infant blind.


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