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There is fire on the marsh
And itís lit the sky
And where no one should tread
There are boot prints.
Drowning in the embers,
Struggling for life
The marshes claiming the minds
Of what is now become
Only the future,
Only the past
Only can we
Ever-last.



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Remember my friend, despite all you are, all we are, the universe will tick on, long past our departure.


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