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This Haiku was written in honor of African American History Month-



Desired color
Like wearing high fashion skin
Exclusive beauty

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Everything I do, I do with passion. Come join me and see what I can do with words!



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The following comments are for "CARAMEL, CHOCOLATE, EBONY"
by DBurke

Hiku
vibrant and simple. Flows nicely. Thank you.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: February 22, 2010 )

Count
That was the only thing I found wrong with this one.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: November 7, 2010 )





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