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Who does it feel Iím walking in circles? 
Life is going by, but Iím not with it. 
You say you love me, but you donít act it. 
I almost never see you, and when I do, you donít see me.  
Do you still love her, or is there something you arenít saying? 
Have you moved on, over me? 
Or do you feel the same way, I feel for you, you just donít show it. 
I need answers, I need them now!  
I want to know, you have broken my heart with your games,  
Iím tired of it, you need to change.  

*for ever there*

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