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You asked so I'll tell.
"Why?"
My reply is as simple as it usually is. Because I've experienced death. I've seen meat, I've smelled it, I know what my god has in store for me. And while I've gotten the grace to experience the goddess four times with my bare eyes, she made me laugh and cry each time,at the same time!
Why?
Because I'm beginning to believe you are here because you want nothing but love from me.
Others have wanted this cage, what it can do, what I can do for them, how I can make them feel, how I can teach them, fuck them, whatever...
you.
You just want to be here, and that is the most simple and beautiful compliment one can pay another in this realm.
So I want to quit smoking cigarettes because you've seen me at my worst, and now deserve the best.
and you stir from your slumber next to me, you reach, and it's hard to type with one hand. So I'll stop typing and be with you.


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The following comments are for "Her IV"
by Robert Walker

touching
I felt honesty with this post. Might not be real but it came across as sincere. Hard to sound sincere when one ain't.
Reminded me of one of the best movie lines in one of 'those' movies.

Something about wanting to be a better man ... delivered by Jack Nicholson ...
Anyhow .. thanks for this.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: February 25, 2010 )

:D
It's sincere, and she's real. Thanks brother.

( Posted by: Robert Walker [Member] On: February 26, 2010 )





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