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Disturbs me: 
This silence in my head. 
Disturbs me: 
This silence in my street. 
Disturbs me: 
This bickering and mindlessness called normalcy. 
Disturbs me:  
A 12 year old shot at her desk. 
Disturbs me: 
Those killed, who deserve peace and love. 
Disturbs me:  
Windows shattering, children oblivious to the horror. 
Disturbs me: 
The hypocrisy of war. 
Disturbs me: 
The wealthy win. 
Disturbs me: 
You justifying one war. 
Disturbs me: 
You arrogantly ignoring the rest. 
Disturbs me: 
To be a religion. 
Disturbs me: 
To call myself man.  


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The following comments are for "Disturbance or Turmoil"
by C.Lynagh

Interesting. Quite a wide spread of topics, but you seem to have got them to flow into together fairly well.
Score 8/10.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: May 24, 2003 )

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