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Delicate man-
but with thick skin
for the woman he loves-
nestles his feelings for
all that is sound.

Unappreciative woman,
carries him with the jealousy
brought about in her
in a third world fashion-

lost and ignorant
never truly knowing his love.

They toil about,
inconsistent in life,
without friends,
without goals,
no aim.

Always on the beaten path-
she with vice words,
thick with thorny steel tips,
meant to cut,
meant to assign death.

But he never dies-
each time reviving himself,
barely reaching out-

usually its my hand he
reaches for.

I love them both despite
her flavor,
despite his weakness
to stand tall.

28 of 31 - 1/10

"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead." — Charles Bukowski

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by pablowilliams

a favourite
incisive and observant as the best of yours are. great descriptive, a wonderfully visual poem…

I think my favourite thing about it though, is the way in which your penetrative gaze is tempered by affection. brilliant. thanks for sharing.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: January 30, 2010 )

As always, your comments not only encourage but inspire! Thank you friend.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: February 1, 2010 )

My friend
One of my favorites. You have a keen observational eye and adroit at putting what is 'scene' to paper...very nice! Your work continually astonishes me!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: February 4, 2010 )

latin wife
beautifully done. they sound like an interesting couple

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: March 2, 2010 )

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