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Powdered blue horns

Feel that I can see
The way again

Open invitation to ideas
Outer pier philosophies
A different twist
Of the same lime

Devotion to false notions
Is forked tongued
Awe inspired shock
To good energy

Carry out the deliverance
Of this man to on high
For all that I have done
May be forgiven

Forgiven by the Lord almighty
Forgiven by myself
Forgiven by all those
I have trespassed upon

So my conscience
May be free
Of all abuses

Ones I have done
To myself
And those I have commited
Against others

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The following comments are for "The Day the Silent Stand Started"
by mason

Silent stand
The first three stanzas left me a little fuzzy but the last are a wonderfully confessional self examination - Nice!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: January 28, 2010 )

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