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I know I shouldn't wish to have met you before we were both scarred.
For we needed to learn and understand enough to become who and what we are.
To be able to fully and karmically appreciate the aspects of He and She in the other.
Still I wish I had met you years ago. Damn the torpedoes, and should "they" ask I'll say I did it for Love, and "they" would understand.

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by Robert Walker

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