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I'll stand alone, in my own, 
Fucken world. 
I'll just be me and I wont let you see,  
Whatís within me. 
I donít want your sympathy, 
I donít want you to help me,  
Leave me alone, in this unknown, 
In my black hole 
Fear me, 
I donít need your empathy, 
Iím sorry for breathing, 
Iím sorry for living, 
But Iím here so fuck you! 
Donít need you to get through anymore, 
You fucken whore! 
I'll stand alone, 
I'll stand on my own. 



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The following comments are for "On My Own"
by Elias

Poetry
Nice words. so far so near
i'll be here.

( Posted by: Lava Inferno [Member] On: May 20, 2003 )





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